Pest02
Soldier
Gender : 
Number of posts : 426
Age : 32
Character Sheet
Name: Frost
Weapons: Samurai Edge(9mm)
Items: USB necklace(Umbrella Uplink), 9mm ammo
 |  Subject: Punctuation counts. Tue Apr 21, 2009 7:54 pm | |
| Punctuation counts, especially in the letter I wrote in first period below.
Dear Isabelle,
I can't live. With you, I feel safe. When you are not around, I am lost. In despair I am always suffering. We can't continue to do this. I die a little inside when you leave me. I'll be happy when you say 'yes', I will jump with joy.
Dear Isabelle,
I can't live with you. I feel safe when you are not around. I am lost in despair. I am always suffering. We can't continue. To do this, I die a little inside. When you leave me I'll be happy. When you say 'yes', I will jump with joy. | |
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