Havoc
Tragically Insane
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 |  Subject: -- Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:30 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: -- Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:37 pm | |
| It made me go D': Which is a good thing. Also, this line : - Quote :
- “I was born to become a destroyer of this Earth, and because of that I must be so.”
Very powarfulz. Your story hit it's climax just right. Your biggest problem is always grammar, but hopefully your comp classes will iron that out. I could try to go into detail, but I'm a pretty crappy teacher. It's all intuition. Regardless, I'll expound if you want. Once again, keep it up. I definitely like your short stories more than your poems, simply because I like.... stories.  | |
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